For my second screening I added in the narrative though it was a bit rough and rushed and improved some of the cuts and edits to make the video flow better.Here is some feedback I got from selescted target audience about my music video.
What went well:
The performance shots were really good.
Lip syncing is synced well
The performance shots are cut together well.
The video flows well.
Performance shots show match on action.
What could be improved:
Narrative could be stronger,
More variety of angles in narrative shots
Composition of performance shots is less controlled.
Some narrative shots are out of focus.
Narrative is repetitive.
From this feedback it is clear there is still work that needs to be done and it is mostly aroun the narrative shots, It is clear that a whole reshoot of the narrative may be the est way to go because then I can rethink the location and frame the shots up better.
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