Music Video

Magazine Advert

Digipak

Construction Progress 4

Current progress of the magazine advert after changing the image.

Second Screening and feedback.

For my second screening I added in the narrative though it was a bit rough and rushed and improved some  of the cuts and edits to make the video flow better.Here is some feedback I got from selescted target audience about my music video.

What went well:
The performance shots were really good.
Lip syncing is synced well
The performance shots are cut together well.
The video flows well.
Performance shots show match on action.

What could be improved:
Narrative could be stronger,
More variety of angles in narrative shots
Composition of performance shots is less controlled.
Some narrative shots are out of focus.
Narrative is repetitive.

From this feedback it is clear there is still work that needs to be done and it is mostly aroun the narrative shots, It is clear that a whole reshoot of the narrative may be the est way to go because then I can rethink the location and frame the shots up better.

Construction Progress 3 and Feedback

Ancillary Task

I got feedback for the ancillary tasks from selected people in my class who fit the target audience exactly. These are some of the responses I got;

What was done well:
Editing of the images was done well and suited the genre.
Consistent color scheme
Images are appropriate and conventional,
Composition of the photo's is good
The fonts work well.
The digipak is creative.
The text is integrated well.


What could be improved:
The advert wasn't as powerful as the digipak so could be improved.
Using the same close ups theme for the advert to keep consistency.
Making the advert more like the digipak .

The digipak is now finalized as it is really strong however I will put more work into the magazine advert to bring it up to an appropriate level similar to the digipak.

Construction Progress 2

The current progression of my music video digipak and magazine advert.
The music video now has the narrative shots in and i'm now working it down an adding in final touches.
The digipak is currently four pages and will most likely be left like this because it looks quite good.
The magazine advert is currently still missing the photo but that is almost sorted out and added in.