Initial Screening and Feedback

For the initial screening the narrative shots hadn't been taken but this is some of the rough responses I got about it so far.

What Went Well:
The performers look fitted into the song.
Variety of shot types and angles made the video flow better.
Cuts well to the music.
Lip syncing is done well
Pacing is good.

Improvements:
One of the shots is out of focus.
The ending is a bit strange the way it cuts to the other location and back again.
Possible speed up the edits in the chorus where it gets a bit faster.
Lighting is a bit of an issue where t goes from dark to light.
Not visually exciting.

From these I will try tailor my final video around some of these ideas as I want my video to be suitable for the target audience.